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Prospectus October 30, 2009

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I believe that there needs to be more done in order to stop the illegal trade of wildlife. I am not arguing that all animal trade is harmful and needs t be stopped, but rather that the illegal trade needs to be ended, and consequences for those who still trade illegally are enforced. I became interested in this topic through our last sequence. I focused on WWF and now I want to continue my concentration in the wildlife conservation field. Illegal wildlife trade is an important issue because it is leading to the extinction of valuable species. Unless we do something about the illegal wildlife trade, valuable species may disappear from our planet. My audience is anyone who is interested in understanding why illegal wildlife trade is harmful to the environment. I will try to persuade them to become more active in this area, to take a stand. I will use scholarly sources to back up my argument. I will also use organizations as sources, in order to prove there are easy ways to get involved with this issue.

Traffic International. <www.traffic.org> WWF and IUCN, 2008. Web. Accessed October 28, 2009.

       This site has lots of recent news articles relating to illegal wildlife trade. It functions as a trade monitoring network.

“Unsustainable and Illegal Wildlife Trade.” <www.panda.org>  WWF. Web. Accessed October 28, 2009.

       I am using this site because it has fact sheets and information describing what ordinary citizens can do to help with the problem.

Wagener, Amy. “Endangered Species: Traded to Death.”  <www.earthtrends.org> August 2001. Web. Accessed October 28, 2009.

       This article is helpful because it answers many of my questions that I will be addressing in my paper. However it is a little old so the statistics may not be so useful. I also disagree with the extreme view of the author that all trade is bad for wildlife.

 

How many rhetorics prompts 10.29 October 29, 2009

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Booth defines rhetoric as the differents ways we attempt to control our realities.

Discourse is related to rhetoric because so much of rhetoric is how you express thoughts and ideas through your speech.

I completely agree that rhetoric makes our realities. I see examples every day. One way I see people changing their own realities is what I think of as the “Negative Nancys”. When someone is optomistic and speaks with upbeat tones, he or she is able to make the best of situations. While on the other hand, a person who complains throughout an event will make his or her reality a negative one.

Warrants are important because they represent the beliefs and values of the audience. If the audience doesnt agree with the warrant, then the it becomes pointless.

“Listening to the other side” is important because if you do not get to know your audience, you will not know what they value, and its hard ot persuade someone to do something if they have no value for it.

 

Evaluation of Sequence 3 sources October 25, 2009

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Traffic.org

This website is dedicated to monitering wildlife trade. It is very relevant to my topic because it is full of wildlife news and answers many of my guiding questions for my research. Its audience is the general public who would be intrested in helping its cause (it’s a .org site after all). traffic.org is a joint program with WWF.org and the IUCN. There is no specific site author, but it is updated everyday with new animal trade news stories. I believe it is acurate because it works with other large animal conservation organizations. It is against illegal animal trade, but not the animal trade completly. Only if it interferes with wildlife conservation does it have issues with animal trade. It is cross referenced by WWF.org.

Panda.org

This site gives me credibilty because the WWF is an international leader in animal conservation and protection. It answers many of my questions and has a section dedicated to illegal wildlife trade. It is for education as well as to gain support for their cause. No publication date or author cited, but the information is as up to date as the other sites. It is very against animal trade. The tone of the website makes it seem as if all animal trade is illegal, which is not true. It is accurate in the facts it presents and is cross listed with traffic.org.

Endangered Species: Traded to Death (earthtrends.org)

This fits my purpose because it has many graphs and statistics to add to my research. It is completely relevent to my topic. The audience is those who want to be educated on the subject of illegal animal trade. The article was written for a credible environmental journal; Earthtrends. The publication date is a little old, August 2001. It seems very accurate because it cites many other works. The author’s stance is obvious very against illegal animal trade, you can tell by the title alone. It is not cited in other works.

 

“Integrating Sources and Avoiding Plagerism”

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1. Direct quotes are taking the author’s exact words and putting them in quotations. Paraphrasing is using the details of a passage, but not the exact wording. Summaries are important points of long passages without all the details.

2. Direct quote- a change would weaken the meaning, it shows you are emphasizing the author’s opinions and perspectives, and shows authorities support your ideas. Paraphase- using details without quoting the whole passage. Summarize- you want to use the main point, but the details are not so important to your argument.

3. Direct quotes need to be used with a signal phrase because it helps integrate the quote into the text, and introducet the author’s ideas.

4. Visuals need to be introduced smoothly because that way information can be conveyed efficiently and clearly. It makes the audience realize the relevance of the  visual.

5. I agree, but sometimes it is hard not to fill your paper with quotations and citings. I often feel if I do not cite every peice of information in my papers then I will be accused of plagiarism.

6. Common knowledge, facts available in mulitiple sources, and your own observations or findings do not need to be aknowledged.

7. In The Everyday Writer  plagiarism is stated as “failing to credit the source of an idea or concept in your text” (192).

 

“Evaluating Sources” response October 22, 2009

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1) Based on your reading of this chapter, list the key questions you should ask yourself about your sources as you conduct your research for this project [or any project].

Does the source fit my purpose? Is it relevant? How does it relate to the level of specialization of my audience? What are the credentials of this source’s publisher or sponsor? What are the credentials of the author? How long ago was it published? How accurate is this source? Can I identify the stance of this source? Is it convincing? Does this source cite other sources? Can it be cross referenced?

2) Locate at least 3 credible sources for your project and list them here:

1.http://www.traffic.org/

 2. http://www.panda.org/about_our_earth/species/about_species/problems/illegal_trade/

3. http://earthtrends.wri.org/features/view_feature.php?theme=7&fid=25

3) Look back at your research questions from your Invention Guide. How does each of these sources help you find answers to your questions?

 These sources provide me with general background information on animal trade, statistics related to importation/exportation and general numbers of animals, details on how illegal trade of animals has a negative effect on the environment, and ways ordinary citizens can help. However, I still need to find sources on measures taken to stop the illegal trading, as well as how to determine if a trade is illegal or not.

4) In what ways is each of these sources credible and relevant for your research?

I found traffic.org to be credible because it was cited in other works I found. On the panda.org/wwf site there was a link for traffic.org. I figured this gave it credibility because WWF is so involved with all areas of animal conservation. Panda.org/WWF is very relevant and credible. I knew it was a reliable source because I analyzed it for the last sequence. It has also cross listed other websites and organizations. Earthtrends.org was relevant because it had many tables and graphs related directly to my questions. The author had cited many other sources so I know it is credible. However, it was published in 2001, so I would like to find some more up to date statistics.

 

Invention Guide Research Questions

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1. What countries are  most involved with the illegal trade of animals?

2. Which animals are most commonly traded?

3. What measures have been taken to stop the illegal animal trade?

4. What determines if animals are being sold or traded illegally?

5. What can ordinary citizens do to stop the illegal animal trade?

6. What effects does this issue have on the environment?

 

new topic freewrite October 20, 2009

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I went home last thursday for fall break right after english class. As soon as i left the room i no longer thought about what i was going to pick for my research topic. it wasnt untill saturday that i remember i had to do a freewrite for my blog. and i had no idea what i was going to do. But later that day while i was putting on mascara i thought “animal trade on the black market”. i guess it ties in with my rhetorical analysis subject, WWF. so thats what im going to do, although i havtn really though about it since then. im still a little unsure about how this paper is supposed to be different from a regular research paper. but now that i have my subject i feel good about it. im happy that looking at the illegal trade of animals still ties in with my previous subjuct. it should be interesting. i am now realizing that it is important to care about what you are writing. so this should be less like torture, since i am interested in it.

 

Prompts on research reading

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1) Describe the process you’ve used for research projects/papers in the past (beginning to end).

Deciding on a topic, then looking up information (usually all internet sources, because it’s easiest), then struggling through writing a pre-designated number of pages about it.
2) Has reading this chapter given you new ideas about how to research a topic and write a research-based essay and why?

The chapter really didn’t give me any new ideas; it was just a good review. A lot of the information about using library search engines was stuff I learned last year in high school, but have since forgotten about. I guess it was a good reminder, I hadn’t really thought about periodicals and surveys or other types of less common research.
3) You may have addressed this in question two, but what is the most important bit of information or advice you gained from this chapter that you think might be useful to you and why?

 Like I said, the library search engine hints. It makes narrowing down your information a lot easier, less headaches from staring at a computer screen scrolling through pages of entries.
4) List characteristics of the following types of sources:

Print 

May have to go out of your way to acquire it. Often older and more reliablet of your way to acquire it. Often older and more reliable

Internet

Easily accessed, may not be reliable

Primary

Provide firsthand knowledge. Usually raw sources of info.

Secondary

Report or analyze the research of others. Usually descriptions or accounts of primary resources.

Scholarly

Mainly available through libraries and databases, authors identified and academic, citations, summaries.

Popular

Lots of ads, journalists for authors, no proper citations.

 

Rhetorical Analysis Final Draft October 12, 2009

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Writer’s Memo

I choose to analyze the World Wildlife Fund because I was interested in learning more about the organization. I figured writing about something I was interested would be easier than picking a random website, but I was worried that I would end up with a “bad taste in my mouth” after trying to break down the website, looking for ways it could be discredited. However, that was not the case, and I think my analysis will be useful for an audience that is interested in learning more about WWF, and considering making a donation.

A Rhetorical Analysis of the World Wildlife Fund Official Website

       “What’s in an elephant’s trunk? 40,000 muscles.” I certainly didn’t know that, and I bet you didn’t either. That little bit of animal trivia was the first thing that caught my eye when I visited the World Wildlife Fund’s website. It wasn’t the only thing either. WWF’s site has tons of vivid pictures, bold graphics, and attention grabbing headlines.

       The reason I’m on wwf.org is English class. We’ve been asked to write a rhetorical analysis of an activism website, so I chose the World Wildlife Fund. I like animals, and I like the wwf.org website. It has more wildlife conservation and education articles than I know what to do with. This sheer amount of info is what’s gonna make me crazy when doing this rhetorical analysis, so I’ll have to work systematically in order to analyze all the appeals thrown at the site’s audience. I will start with analyzing the site’s design and organization. Next I will examine the site’s credibility, or Ethos, hopefully gaining an understanding of what legitimizes the WWF’s argument. Then I will look at what the site uses to make an appeal to the values of its audience, based on Pathos. Finally, I will examine how the WWF uses Logos, or reason, to prove the claims it is making.

       Hopefully this will make reading through the site, and analyzing all of its facts easier for anyone interested in the World Wildlife Fund. The WWF site gives information to those interested in species conservation, wildlife news, climate changes, and human’s effects on the environment. However, the site’s main purpose is to make a plea for donations, in able to continue WWF’s conservation efforts. The audience can be anyone from a student doing a project on endangered animals to someone interested in actually donating to the World Wildlife Fund. As you can see, this makes the WWF site’s audience very broad, no matter how directed towards encouraging donations it may be. This makes my analysis useful to anyone interested in any facet of WWF.

       The World Wildlife Fund began in September of 1961 with a group of European naturalists and scientists, as well as political and business leaders. The headquarters were located in Morges, Switzerland. Since then the World Wildlife Fund has spread to over 11,000 projects in 130 countries. The mission of WWF is simply “The conservation of nature”. The goal is that “By 2020 WWF will conserve 19 of the world’s most important natural places and significantly change global markets to protect the future of nature.” Because most of the revenue that goes toward the variety of projects that WWF undergoes comes from individual donors (44% total revenue from individual contributions as opposed to 13% from government grants), the WWF website is an important tool for reaching potential donators.

       The World Wildlife Fund’s site has lots of professional appeal. The site has many different articles, graphics and pictures, yet still looks clean and organized. On the home page for the United States WWF there is a header for all the different sections of the site, from “Home” to “What We Do”, to “Act Now”. Every time you access a page in a new section, the header remains the same. This repetition increases usability and prevents the audience from getting lost within the site. Located above the header in the top left is the WWF Panda logo in black and white. Although it is small, it stands out and is also repeated through the site on every page. Another unchanging element of the WWF site is the globe graphic in the top left with an email sign up and the small “Donate, Adopt, Travel” header. This header and graphic are obviously the “moneymakers” of the website. Its functions all revolve around earning money in some way. The repetition serves in familiarizing the site’s viewers with the idea of giving to WWF.

       Except for some major headlines and photos, almost all text and graphics are aligned to the left of the website page. The font used for these is simple and down to business, just like the World Wildlife Fund. It is plain, yet readable on all backgrounds. The font color is usually in black to contrast the white pages, but is sometimes orange or blue to go with the graphics. The main navigation header has capitalized font, while the headlines have bolded font.

       The WWF site builders made good use of proximity. Methods of donating and supporting WWF are located next to each other on the home page. The features stories are grouped together towards the bottom of the page in a graphic spread that has an earthy tone to appeal to a nature-appreciating audience. Bullet points for articles of the same type are grouped together under a common descriptive title. However, there are so many articles that are bullet pointed that none of them grab my attention. I feel like this is ineffective and although it is not cluttered, there are simply too many articles listed. If I were searching for specific information I would much rather scroll to the very end of the page and look through the somewhat repetitive, yet, much simpler second list of bulleted links.

       The colors used on the WWF site are generally earthy, muted shades of greens, blues, oranges, and browns. These less intense, natural colors match well with the websites purpose. They are nature oriented, just like the World Wildlife Fund. Some graphics used throughout the pages are rustic and outdoorsy looking as well. This type of appearance sets a mood for the audience, subtly reminding them why they are visiting the WWF site.

       The second link on the navigation heading on the top of the WWF home page is “Who We Are”. When you click the link it takes you to a page dedicated to Ethos. A history of WWF is given, stating that the organization has been around since 1961, and has since then “Been achieving results from around the world”. The site creators put much of WWF’s credibility on its age, as well as the people who work within the organization. “Experts in conservation” reads one article headline, with a “Meet the WWF’s experts” link below it. When the link is clicked you can access the different employees of WWF, and read through their credentials. This connection says that because the employees of WWF are experts in their area, then the whole organization is an expert in conservation, a genetic fallacy. The World Wildlife Fund is not simply an expert just because its members are, but for other reasons.

       The site creators use Ethos again with a headline titled “Accountability”. Underneath this headline are two graphics, one is for a “Four Star Charity Rating” from Charity Navigator, and the other is a “Meets BBB Wise Giving Alliance Standards for Charity Accountability”. This form of Ethos shows that World Wildlife Fund is recognized by outside sources with credibility.

       The World Wildlife Fund bases many of its appeals to its audience on Pathos. On the home page one of the first things the audience sees is a slideshow of wildlife related pictures. Many of these are pictures of baby animals, with headlines like “As sea ice recedes, young walruses are at risk”. This slideshow serves to play at people’s emotions. Because the WWF site will most likely have people who enjoy animals as an audience, the site’s creators know that they will be able to get a compassionate reaction out of them through photos of elusive species going extinct, or images of suffering animals, such as an illegally poached tiger’s skin. Other quotes say “Pollution in the Mekong River is Killing Dolphins” with a photo of one of these dolphins swimming in a dirty looking river. This connects to the audience’s values because pollution is a human fault, meaning we are directly responsible for killing the dolphins. Better yet is “Every region of the United States is already experiencing climate change”, with a picture of road signs halfway under water. This quote hits close to home. For some members of the site’s audience it may not matter to them if some species of animals can go extinct, but it will matter if they are affected by the issues presented. Pathos is easily recognized all over the World Wildlife Fund’s site. It is stated in the “Who We Are” section that WWF is “An organization based on trust” . Trust is a human emotion. Audiences are receptive to it, which is why it is used as a Pathos appeal. The more the site grabs at our emotions, the more likely we are to support WWF.

        The most abundant of appeals, however, is Logos. WWF’s site is full of information. There are many articles about endangered species and habitats that need conservation. These provide logical reasons for why it is a good idea to donate to WWF. Under the “Funding and Financial Overview” there are statistics for both program revenue and expenses. They show how the donated money is being spent, answering questions for potential donators. The quote under one of the graphs reads “82 percent of WWF’s spending is directed to worldwide conservation activities”. This way, the audience knows that if they were to donate money, it would most likely be used directly for conservation of wildlife programs.

       After completing my analysis of the site I’ve realized that it is very accessible and well designed. Its ease of use adds to the appeals by Ethos, Pathos, and Logos. While going through WWF’s site I have seen that most of their claims have been backed up by hard evidence, except for one logical fallacy. Now that I have analyzed this site, I feel even more comfortable about donating to the World Wildlife Fund, when I expected to finish feeling somewhat disillusioned. Every point of its rhetorical appeals, combined with the site’s design, has shown that WWF is worth the audience’s time, and maybe even a donation or two.

 

Rhetorical Analysis Rough Draft October 8, 2009

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“What’s in an elephant’s trunk? 40,000 muscles.”  I certainly didn’t know that, and I bet you didn’t either. That little bit of animal trivia was the first thing that caught my eye when I visited the World Wildlife Fund’s website. It wasn’t the only thing either.  WWF’s site has tons of vivid pictures, bold graphics and attention grabbing headlines. 

The reason I’m on wwf.org is English class. We’ve been asked to write a rhetorical analysis of an activism website, so I chose the World Wildlife Fund. I like animals, and I like the wwf.org website. It has more wildlife conservation and education articles than I know what to do with. This sheer amount of info is what’s gonna make me crazy when doing this rhetorical analysis, so I’ll have to work systematically in order to analyze all the appeals thrown at the site’s audience.  I will start with analyzing the site’s design and organization. Next I will examine the site’s credibility, or Ethos, hopefully gaining an understanding of what legitimizes the WWF’s argument. Then I will look at what the site uses to make an appeal to the values of its audience, based on Pathos. Finally, I will examine how the WWF uses Logos, or reason, to prove the claims it is making.

Hopefully this will make reading through the site, and analyzing all of its facts easier for anyone interested in the World Wildlife Fund. Because the site has so many different levels of information, the audience is very broad, making my analysis useful to anyone who has any interest at all in learning about WWF.

The World Wildlife Fund began in September of 1961 with a group of European naturalists and scientists, as well as political and business leaders. The headquarters were located in Morges, Switzerland.  Since then the World Wildlife Fund has spread to over 11,000 projects in 130 countries. The mission of WWF is simply “The conservation of nature”. The goal is that “By 2020 WWF will conserve 19 of the world’s most important natural places and significantly change global markets to protect the future of nature.”  Because most of the revenue that goes toward the variety of projects that WWF undergoes comes from individual donors (44% total revenue from individual contributions as opposed to 13% from government grants), the WWF website is an important tool for reaching potential donators.

The World Wildlife Fund’s site has lots of professional appeal. The site has many different articles, graphics and pictures, yet still looks clean and organized. On the home page for the United States WWF, there is a header for all the different sections of the site, from “Home” to “What We Do”, to “Act Now”. Every time you access a page in a new section, the header remains the same. This repetition increases usability and prevents the audience from getting lost within the site. Located above the header in the top left is the WWF Panda logo in black and white. Although it is small, it stands out and is also repeated through the site on every page. Another unchanging element of the WWF site is the globe graphic in the top left with an email sign up and the small “Donate, Adopt, Travel” header. This header and graphic are obviously the “moneymakers” of the website. Its functions all revolve around earning money in some way. The repetition serves in familiarizing the site’s viewers with the idea of giving to WWF.

Except for some major headlines and photos, almost all text and graphics are aligned to the left of the website page. The font used for these is simple and down to business, just like the World Wildlife Fund. It is plain, yet readable on all backgrounds. The font color is usually in black to contrast the white pages, but is sometimes orange or blue to go with the graphics. The main navigation header has capitalized font, while the headlines have bolded font.

The WWF site builders made good use of proximity. Methods of donating and supporting WWF are located next to each other on the home page. The features stories are grouped together towards the bottom of the page in a graphic spread that has an earthy tone to appeal to a nature-appreciating audience. Bullet points for articles of the same type are grouped together under a common descriptive title. However, there are so many articles that are bullet pointed that none of them grab my attention. I feel like this is ineffective and although it is not cluttered, there are simply too many articles listed. If I were searching for specific information I would much rather scroll to the very end of the page and look through the somewhat repetitive, yet, much simpler second list of bulleted links.

The colors used on the WWF site are generally earthy, muted shades of greens, blues, oranges, and browns. These less intense, natural colors match well with the websites purpose. They are nature oriented, just like the World Wildlife Fund. Some graphics used throughout the pages are rustic and outdoorsy looking as well. This type of appearance sets a mood for the audience, subtly reminding them why they are visiting the WWF site.

The second link on the navigation heading on the top of the WWF home page is “Who We Are”. When you click the link it takes you to a page dedicated to Ethos. A history of WWF is given, stating that the organization has been around since 1961, and has since then “Been achieving results from around the world”.  The site creators put much of WWF’s credibility on its age, as well as the people who work within the organization. “Experts in conservation” reads one article headline, with a “Meet the WWF’s experts” link below it. When the link is clicked you can access the different employees of WWF, and read through their credentials. This connection says that because the employees of WWF are experts in their area, then the whole organization is an expert in conservation, a genetic fallacy. The World Wildlife Fund is not simply an expert just because its members are, but for other reasons.

The site creators use Ethos again with a headline titled “Accountability”. Underneath this headline are two graphics, one is for a “Four Star Charity Rating” from Charity Navigator, and the other is a “Meets BBB Wise Giving Alliance Standards for Charity Accountability”. This form of Ethos shows that World Wildlife Fund is recognized by outside sources with credibility.

The World Wildlife Fund bases many of its appeals to its audience on Pathos. On the home page one of the first things the audience sees is a slideshow of wildlife related pictures. Many of these are pictures of baby animals, with headlines like “As sea ice recedes, young walruses are at risk”. This slideshow serves to play at people’s emotions. Because the WWF site will most likely have people who enjoy animals as an audience, the site’s creators know that they will be able to get a compassionate reaction out of them through photos of elusive species going extinct, or images of suffering animals. Other quotes say “Pollution in the Mekong River is Killing Dolphins”. This connects to the audience’s values because pollution is a human fault, meaning we are directly responsible for killing the dolphins. Better yet is “Every region of the United States is already experiencing climate change”, with a picture of road signs halfway under water. This quote hits close to home. For some members of the site’s audience it may not matter to them if some species of animals can go extinct, but it will matter if they are affected by the issues presented. Pathos is easily recognized all over the World Wildlife Fund’s site.  It is stated in the “Who We Are” section that WWF is “An organization based on trust”.  Trust is a human emotion. Audiences are receptive to it, which is why it is used as a Pathos appeal. The more the site grabs at our emotions, the more likely we are to support WWF.

The most abundant of appeals, however, is Logos. WWF’s site is full of information. There are many articles about endangered species and habitats that need conservation. These provide logical reasons for why it is a good idea to donate to WWF.  Under the “Funding and Financial Overview” there are statistics for both program revenue and expenses. They show how the donated money is being spent, answering questions for potential donators. The quote under one of the graphs reads “82 percent of WWF’s spending is directed to worldwide conservation activities”. This way, the audience knows that if they were to donate money, it would most likely be used directly for conservation of wildlife programs.

Need to add conclusion…